Evidence of Filming: Rough cut

Here is a rough cut of what as a group we have filmed thus far. This is a demonstration of what we consider to be am okay representation of our narrative, there are many elements that have room for improvements such as the ending, by incorporating more scenes.

(here is a reminder of the brain storming of our narrative, i have include this video to show you the correlation between our actual rough cut and out brain storming of  ideas

What we have achieved:
so far my group and I have used a range of shots as well as effectively demonstrating how story-boarding and planning can result in an effective piece of work. Thus far within the rough cut you can see an incorporation of multiple theories begin Todorovs equilibrium theory, shown in the change of our narrative, Levi Strauss's Binary opposition, the constant reflection of evil vs good and dark vs light, Paul wells audience understanding, displayed through shots taken.

What we hope to achieve for full trailer:
Despite a clear use of a narrative, there is room for improvements in regards to making the narrative much clearer . The role of editing can also be improved such as the the transitions between clips can be smoother, by doing this it will make the trailer look much neater and more effective. The majority of our changes that need to be made are to make the trailer more easier to understand and by filming more sense this should add to the narrative of the trailer as well as showing an effective use of timing and planning .